Comments : The One Thing I Need

  • 18 years ago

    by DiscoBore234

    Nice work...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Great write, full of emotion and sadness... My only suggestion is to tweak it a bit so it flows a little better... im not sure how to but thats it... Keep the poems coming!

    -ooch =D