Whew thats a longer poem then i expected..but great job..with it..kinda like a story poem thing..Very Well Done 5/5
thank you for all your comments i really appreciate it
~The Poet~

Well written

An excellent poem, you really managed to convey a story in that and express your feelings through words, its terrible what bulimia and anorexia does to u. i hope this is not happening to u and if it is.. i wish u all the best, you write some excellent poems. xxxxx

Wow. just wow. that was gr8. loved it. 5/5
~*Who Cares?*~

Wow. just wow. that was really super good. i hope you're not doing this to yourself. it's terrible thing. but your poem was really really super good. you can turn the smallest things and turn into one of the best things to read about. even if it is about purging....lol really super good. but please....don't do anything to hurt yourself...please.
5/5
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