Your poem was really emotional for me concidering im in the same situation with my father, it was beautiful in its own way and i really loved it, keep it up girl and keep faith!

Thats a beautiful poem, it put tears in my eyes. i know exactly how you are feeling. my dad totally rejected me too and now he's in jail for something else and im not allowed to see him, even if i could i dont want to. so i also know what it's like to have none. good job, keep it up 5/5

Oh dear...i love my father a lot and now i myself a father...i understand this relation and respect right from my heart...feel so sorry that u hv not been lucky enough to taste this lovely relation..but then there has to some message from God for u in this.

Stay strong and take care of urself
u really wrote it beautifully.

5/5