I'm Beginning To Miss You

by Michelle   Feb 5, 2006


I'm Beginning To Miss You.

I'm beginning to miss you,
As tears stroll down my face,
I don't know what to do,
As my heart begins to race.

Where will I turn?
Where will I go?
What will I learn?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Pete

    This looks like it could have some serious potential to be an excellent poem. If you ellaborate a little bit more on your own emotions, it would add that personal touch that everyone loves in a poem.
    I really do like the idea of this, its only short but i can tell it was written with passion.

    Overall not a badly written piece, but could be so much more!

    [4/5]

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Short but sweet....take care sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by Milton

    I liked it. I had the same feeling when everything started.. And I'm still feeling so down until she comes back. But good stuff!

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    I feel the same thanks for the comment!!!!!!!

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