It flowed very nicely. I also Liked your word choices. 5/5 4 sure

I swear i've read this poem before, but oh well, maybe not!
i really enjoyed this poem because you share raw emotions and feelings in a way that everyone can understand!
luv em

Excellent. i can really relate to this. i love poems that are like that. great poem.

Hey I don't know what to say. I like this poem, you displayed the emotions so well, an the format was excellent, the length was perfectm abd a lot of people can probably relate, I am glad I chose to read this poem out of all the poems you have. Good job.

5/5 I really like this poem.. it's written very nicely

That is sadified, I feel that way some times

Nice awsome poems from the heart are the beat Φ?

Wow! this was soooo great! that is wonderful!! theres not much i can say that i didn't like about this piece! **5/5**

Love
**Lolli**

I loved your poem. i can relate to it. Great poem. 5/5

I like it, you could have done a better job with your use of words but again i like it

You've beautifully put down all thats on ur mind !! is wonderful !
5/5
love
amy

I really liked this simple but touching i think alot of people feel like that sometimes keep up the good work xxALLYxx

Other great work that you put up on this here site. I like the way you write. I cant really explain what it is but I like it!! haha. Keep it up and you will go far with them
~Juls~

That was great. i loved it. i know exactly that feeling. "My dreams are filled with fright
Of hate filled days gone by"
these are my favorite lines so powerful
Great job.
Emma 5/5

A nice and powerful poem here love, pained and depressed, but full of emotion and expression. I send a billion and ten hugs to you baby and then a few more. Life is suck a struggle sometimes and it can be so hard to find reasons to keep fighting. I hope you will find a life line soon, if you want to talk, I would be happy to do so. I've been to hell and back by some miracle, so just know you're not alone.

-Tainted Mikochan

That was an awsome poem. I really liked it and enjoyed reading it. You are really talented. *5/5*

Great job I can relate to it, try expanding your word choice

Wow...=)...great job! keep up the good work!

It had been shorter but it was something that was really good with the short line thingy. Really enjoyed this which is something that portrayed quite a bit. So yeah this was good.
~Faith-less