by alana
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I loved how you wrote this one. it was so beautiful. Its so sad to see people like this in this situation and to hear abou them. but you wrote it beautifully and really grasped the concept! |
O man! this was AWESOME! you can tell you really know what your writting about! i really loved it! it was great but sadly true for some. cheack some of my poems out! |
by Stephy
Beautifully written. so sad though...I hope you're doing better(well if it was about you) good job-xxx- |
by Erica
Wow, great poem you find the most orginal things to write about... its ahhmazing!! ;P Keep up the magnificent work! oxox |
by leilani
Love it.. its good you're really skilled at writing.. can relate to this poem was like that in middle school sad yes but true... i like it, i love your work, you're one of favs. |
by Lovemylove
Awesome Poem, great words of choice by the way thanks for commenting on my poem. |
by Lovemylove
Great Poem loved reading it great choices of words keep on writing! By the way thanks for commenting on one of my poems it meant alot to me. |
So her mom and her dad will never see |
by hopeless08
That's really sad, I hope that you haven't experienced this, but if you have I hope you recover. It's a great poem though. |
by UnToLd TrUtH
This is so sad yet so true...This is what are world is cummunicating to everyone. It's really sad.... But you wrote it so beautifully. |
by Chelsey
Wonderfully written, I really liked this poem it was very real and down to earth with a good flow. sad but true excellent work.5/5 |
by JAy
Wow, i love it.. |
Another amazing poem...Im adding you to my favorites! |
You should be a proffesional poet. |
I can relate to this poem, I starved myself for awhile, and my family found out. Now I am learning to eat again. I really enjoyed this poem. |