Comments : Her Little Secret

  • 18 years ago

    by alana

    :(
    sad! cuz thats how i use to be...

  • I loved how you wrote this one. it was so beautiful. Its so sad to see people like this in this situation and to hear abou them. but you wrote it beautifully and really grasped the concept!
    love always...

  • O man! this was AWESOME! you can tell you really know what your writting about! i really loved it! it was great but sadly true for some. cheack some of my poems out!
    p.s. keep up the great work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    Beautifully written. so sad though...I hope you're doing better(well if it was about you) good job-xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Erica

    Wow, great poem you find the most orginal things to write about... its ahhmazing!! ;P Keep up the magnificent work! oxox

  • 18 years ago

    by leilani

    Love it.. its good you're really skilled at writing.. can relate to this poem was like that in middle school sad yes but true... i like it, i love your work, you're one of favs.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovemylove

    Awesome Poem, great words of choice by the way thanks for commenting on my poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovemylove

    Great Poem loved reading it great choices of words keep on writing! By the way thanks for commenting on one of my poems it meant alot to me.

  • 18 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    So her mom and her dad will never see
    That she's everything she hates to be

    wow i really love that line!

  • 18 years ago

    by hopeless08

    That's really sad, I hope that you haven't experienced this, but if you have I hope you recover. It's a great poem though.

    ~hopeless~

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is so sad yet so true...This is what are world is cummunicating to everyone. It's really sad.... But you wrote it so beautifully.

    Mallori

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Wonderfully written, I really liked this poem it was very real and down to earth with a good flow. sad but true excellent work.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by JAy

    Wow, i love it..
    -story of my life.

  • 17 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Another amazing poem...Im adding you to my favorites!

    Brooke<3

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    You should be a proffesional poet.

  • 16 years ago

    by aMomentLostInTime

    I can relate to this poem, I starved myself for awhile, and my family found out. Now I am learning to eat again. I really enjoyed this poem.