Maybe Not

by >> Beautifully Mistaken   Feb 6, 2006


Wishing You Were Dead,
Is All That Consumes Your Mind,
Thinking That If You Ended It,
All The Pain Would Go Away.

Your Life Is Lived For Yourself,
But Also For The Others Around You,
Your Simple Presence Changes Everything,
Without You In It, Nothing Would Be The Same.

Taking A Life Away Such As Your Own,
Would Be Like Taking The Lives Of The Ones You Love,
Because They Might Of Lost What They Have Been Living For,
To See You Grow, And Be Happy.

Your Life May Be In Your Own Hands,
But Its The Ones You Love That Are Left With The Consequences,
Live Your Life Not Only For Yourself,
But Also For The Ones Around You.

** this is what ive become to realise. It may be your life to live, but to take something so precious away from the ones you love, it just isnt right.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Leah

    Okae. one spelling mistake. realize is with a z. i really like the word choice, but the capitals on every letter makes things a bit confusing. love leah xox

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Beautifully Broken*~

    Great poem i agree with you, you shouldnt take something so precious (your life) away from your loved ones you may be having a hard time but if you seek help from those who love you you will be ok. Thanks for the comment 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    I like it, deep, and very considerate, but what if the reason you're standing on a 20th storey windowsill is because of the people around you? Thanks for your comment on my poem!
    Helen

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Aye dis is true....deserves a 10/10 hehe..love dia mwaz xoxox....

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    I love this poem it is soo very true. I am glad that you have finally come to believe this and I hope that this revelation will help you. I only wish i could believe such a thing. ahh well. great poem, keep it up.5/5

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*~*

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