Wow man, this was just too good. i never tried any of the different way of writing a poem, from where do you get all this information?
well u really wrote it beautifully.

great poem indeed
take care and all the best

Beautifully done! Wow, it's simply perfect! Love the last line!

Enchanting as usual ^_^ I love it!

... Kind of blown away with this one! It truly is amazing from start to finish. A spectacular poem!!

I love your description of all the sins of the world washed away!

beautifully penned all the way through!

shobhana

This became an image of a tranquil spring-morning to me, and it made me smile (and awoke memories of brighter days), and I could almost smell the scents that the rain leaves behind on such a day.

Good job

Yeah i really llke this, where'd you get the idea of a nonet from? Never heard of that before! Looks cool on a page though :) I guess im jus not well versed enough in proper poetic technique or whatever :P