Mark, this is sad. =(

i wish i could take away all your pain and make you happy. please don't give up on life...there's so much you can do and accomplish. we only have one shot at this...let's make it fun and worthwhile.

i'm always here for you, i swear. let me know if there's anything i can do for you...

good poem, btw. keep it up =)

-Brittnay

Awww, This was really good. But I think the last line was a bit forced, But anywho I still liked it :P