Im so sorry about your grandad........i hope you are ok.........that was beautifully written though! and it expressed how you felt about it.........i think its an excellent poem as it is :]
~chelsea~

I'm so sorry about your loss. I can tell you i know how you feel, but i have lost someone close to me. With time the pain will get easier, but it is still hard. Again, i'm so sorry... If you need to talk, please feel free to email me.
Lex

Its a poem to me. and its beautifull. i feel bad about your grandad.. great poems about him though. 5/5 !props!