Credit goes to you...

by PURE HEART   Feb 6, 2006


I did not know how to write,
I did not know how to bring light.
to the words of my imagination,
through the art of presentation.

You made me feel the meaning of words,
You made me feel the song of birds.
You made me feel the presence of sun,
You made me feel how the life turns.

I realized why the heart beats,
I realized why the people meet.
I realized why we love someone,
I realized how to feel the fun.

Sensing and feeling is all taught by you,
I got the art of writing which is new.
Expressing my emotions through the heartfelt words,
this credit goes to you- my dear LOVE....

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  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, so thats y u took so much time in coming back...u were busy with someone who deserves all this credit.. :o)

    hey this is again a very nice poem and i must say that there seems to be some big change in ur poem from what i had last time when u posted.

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    I really liked this one. You are right about it, with out an inspiration we cant write poetry. Very well written. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    There is always some inspiration behind everything we do in life....through pain we gain inspiration...,through happiness we gain inspiration....Nice poem....take care and keep smiling always....

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Wonderful poem Bharti! Nice rhythm and a sweet piece of work! Well done!

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