Scribbles

by lonelynow   Feb 6, 2006


Tear stains
From yet another salty tear
Rain falling
I'm still hurting here

Tears drip
Down my already tear-stained face
Rain hardens
I don't want to go back to that place

Tears hidden
Where you can't see
Rain stops
Everybody leaves me

*can't think of a name, but i scribbled this on some scrap paper in maths. if anyone thinks of a name please PLEASE let me know. (also please don't suggest "everybody leaves me") Thanks*

**please please comment and vote (thank you)**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Gr8 poem...the title is fine:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Its a rlly good poem. u could call it "raining tears". loved it. keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by LyricalFlow

    I like da name scribbles, thats wat mainly attracted me to it....Love dis poem realy good and shows alot of emotion, its what i like to see in poetry

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Hey. You know what, I think 'scribbles' is a great name for it. It is what you were doing when you wrote it, and I think it is really appropiate and different. As for the poem, I loved it! Great work, take care
    Polly

  • 18 years ago

    by Ash LEIGH

    Great emotions, call it " tears" or "my tears" good poem , keep writing

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