I Love It Robert..Its funny...NIce Job..Hey where ya been lately i miss ya..I hope to ttyl..Love Joclyn

I loved your poem well really song, It was so funny...Can I add you to my favorites [I always ask before I add]..yeah but really its the best 5/5!!!

Its an awesome poem. i think u hav WAY too much time on ur hands tho. lol. well u r a kool poet. hav fun w/ ur rapping!!
love lots,
sore

Omg i hate that song so this ROX MY SOX!!!
Peace
-----Misty-----

Its really good and funny well done, you seem to be a good at rap, :) * xxx

I want cake now.. Damn you!!...

Lol ok that was good very funny.. I hate 50 Cent but this poem was to awsome.. nice job.. and I liked how everyhting fit under the new bakery theme yet still had the underlying message. Nice job

Hella funny lol

Haha this is great!

You are so crazy but i like it 5/5

That was really funn..8-)...i hope you don't mind i sent it to my bf...i think he'll like it too...5/5

Tia Bia

Haha i loved that it was wicked cute

Hahaha, that is so awesome...lol, good on ya

Thats freakin awesome! good job since i HATE that song...

Haha, wow, nice. i like this version better! lol

Haha that was good. so cute. you did a good job 5/5

Haha!!
this is amazing!
i could never think of something like that!
5/5 most definatly!

<3
XxAshleyxX

<333 That was amazing! I loved it! 5/5!!

OMG that difinitly made me laugh...wicked good poem, and now i want some cake thank you very much=)like this version way better!