Sorry

by aaron c s   Feb 6, 2006


I don't need your implications.
Yet I always strive for more.
I don't want your complications.
Even though they're part of your whole.
I don't want to be part of your situations.
And it's me who starts every one.
I don't want to know your imaginations.
But I always leave you alone.
I don't live for your desperations.
Yet I leave you wanting everything.
I know you want some variations.
So I give you your wish and I leave.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    I'm with !Britt! here. The way you have structured the use of "tions" is quite disruptive to the flow. At first I wasn't sure why it didn't work for me, but then I read her comment and read it out loud, and there it was. It's quite an interesting way of putting a poem together, but it just doesn't quite work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rikki

    Hey it's me! :D Good poem! I really love your work. Keep at it! :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very creative and imaginative

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Godo one...i need you to get people to check otu my stuff thnxs

    LISSA

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