Comments : Precious Memories

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    It's nice to see that you're getting more poems, this poem is really good, I like that you rhymes, good job!

    Once again it is a short poem, and that's alright if it's not your style don't try. So yeah good poem, sorry for the lame comment.

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I love this line:

    "It's sad that all these memories
    Will slowly fade to tears"

    Good stuff. Keep it up~Holly