Aww I can really relate to this one.. It sounds like you are truely in love.. And if not, you sure fooled me.. LOL Great job hun...

Aww, it's soo adorable, yeah, i really can relate to this poem to! And i know how it feels, i think this is really cute! good job!

I like the begining alot but I happend to not like this one line "I don't know if you feel these feelings quite so strong." sorry it's just like..."hmm" to me but other than that it's good.I gave it a 4/5.Keep up the good work.