by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life Feb 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I look in the mirror, |
I want to cry because this is so good, i can relate to this poem. This is really good. Keep it up i love this poem. |
So incredibly fabulious i <3 it! |
by njabulo b
Hold on!, that was a very nice poem. |
by Yazdan
Nice poem, very nice poem. I'm disputing with myself whether or not the ending helps it or hurts it. Once again, very nice use of words, it has a very loose structure but it still flows quite nicely. I'd be interested to see how you write a poem with a rhyme scheme. If you can't come up with words that rhyme with eachother a great website for that is rhymezone.com I look forward to readin more of your poems. You are definitly going on my favorites list |
I think this is a very strong poem. Very talented writer. Keep it up. =D |