This was very good Jess. I liked it. Keep up the awsome work.

~Joe~

Hey Jess,

Awesome starter poem, lol damn that was long! diction was good however the format limited the flow abit, but you did a great Job Jess well done=) looking forward to seeing more

Jenn

Ps: this iwas wonderful
That misty night,
That dismal moon,
Dead search for family,
While angels sing, in dark,
The dead seek out their father,
The dead seek out sin.
They belong back home

Great start dear...welcome to the club...its really an amazing poem..great fantasy & nicely penned

i love dark poems and u surely is one to watch out for

all the best and take care

WOW. This poem was excellent for a first poem, and it was really long I love it, but sometimes I got a little confused. I dunno I think it's funny that they didn't care about that guy who died. Haha, you should have added a part where those guys died also, that would be perfect. And I don't understand, how could "he" go home with "she" after "he" died? Or are there two "he"'s ?

Anyways great poem 5/5.

Wow, great poem =) I voted a 5 for this one.. it would be great if you could check out my poem "Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind" thanks a lot.. hugs from Emilia =)

Very very well written! Keep it up!! I voted 5@!#$@ Could you check out a few of my poems and let me know what you think? I need more comments to see what i can change to make them better...THANKS and Great JOB!!

Absaolutely awesome. is this the first poem you've ever written or just the best one for a starter, because it's really good. I cant wait to see some more poems from you.
Tara xxx