Comments : Once Loaded Gun

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow!! thats superb..can feel the pain u r going thro here. very nicely xpressed the feelings.

    take care/stay strong and all the best
    5/5

    hope all is well, its been long since i had a word from u.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley

    This is a great poem, i know how your feeling when u say this
    You say you`re sorry
    But you don`t care
    You cough up a story
    For every time you were never there

    the ending is amazing, it totally wraps up the poem which is full of emotion.. i wish u didnt have to feel like this-hugs-hayley-