by Simon Hayes
Sad, but beautifully written! Another enjoyable poem :) |
by none
Absolutley excellent! 5/5 great job. |
by Melissa
So sad, but beautifully done! I especially love the last stanza, great job! |
Katie, |
This is sooooo good! i love the contrasts |
Wow, this was an interesting poem, posing an interesting idea about the impact of POV. You had a unique message with your own personal touch and exceptional imagery. Nice job hun! |