Don't Judge Me

by End Of Eternity   Feb 7, 2006


Life is so funny
as we run around achieving hidden tasks
with one mother called money
and hiding face under different masks

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don't judge me by my face
i lost the real one in my childhood
my foots are not worth for you to trace
as my principles are always misunderstood

don't judge me by my smile
though i do laugh sometimes for awhile
i have a river of sorrow in my veins
and my smile makes me look insane

and don't you please judge me by my tears
i am so glad that i have something called life
my black book of fate has everything so clear
and every tear drop of mine has something to hide

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life is just so much funny
as we curse others for our misery
and we run around for some filthy money
so we forget behind that mask, the real me

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so don't you judge me by my promises
as i have learned the art to lie elegantly
time has made deep scars in my senses
truth dies at the edge of my lips so silently

don't judge me by what i write
as i mean nothing for what i feel inside
but life is so funny as i find
my smile has so much to hide

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    Wow! This is some poem. You have said so much in this. The way you portray the diffrent faces people put on. At the same time it is very sad that people feel they cam not be themselves.

    don't judge me by my face
    i lost the real one in my childhood
    my foots are not worth for you to trace
    as my principles are always misunderstood

    I wish the joy of childhood could still be felt.
    Very heartfelt piece.
    Take care dost
    Love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Different - interesting rhyme scheme - though I think it works rather well. Great write.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Your poem indeed has a new taste that i really like. good luck . loved your poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kittie

    Hey, great poem, its like sumthin i wish would happen!!!!! dude, ur a really great writer, i got good news, im gonna put it on a quote, its about my poem c.a.m and the title of the quote will b c.a.m im happy 4 once!!! weeeeeeee!!!! lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Breana Marie

    I love this poem i can understand and the words you use and so amazing.. im looking forward to more of your poems to come.. i like all of your poems so far but this one i can relate to.. keep uo the good work

    *~*Breana Marie*~*

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