Hi Nitin,
u r superb....... this is so deep and meaningful. each line has its own meaning. awesome!!!!!
excellent job....i wish i could give 10/5.

keep writing dear
Bharti

Great poem i loved it and i really understand keep it up~~~~~~~~~5/5!!!!!!!!!

'so don't you judge me by my promises
as i have learned the art to lie elegantly
time has made deep scars in my senses
truth dies at the edge of my lips so silently'

How on earth did you come up with such brilliant lines? I honestly get speechless after reading your poem. I have said this before and I will say it again, you are one of the most talented poets in this site. Such an honor to read your poems. Excellent... Excellent... Excellent! I have no other words to describe it. lol....

Love
Michelle

Lovely Nithin! this is so beautiful - and so true. the flow to this poem is amongst your best, i should think. there's a fantastic synergy to the whole poem!!

great, great, great!!!

shobhana

Wow. This was truely a great poem. I really loved it. Especialy the part where it said "truth dies at the edge of my lips so silently.". loved it. Of couse i Liked everything but that hit me the most. Since i know exactly how that feels. Great work.

Nice work, alot of layers and different meanings to this poem. I found the last stanza a bit of a contrast and quite ironic, almost as if you are saying don't judge me by this poem. I thought this stanza stood out the most, very deeply poetic and flawless 'so don't you judge me by my promises
as i have learned the art to lie elegantly
time has made deep scars in my senses
truth dies at the edge of my lips so silently'

Nice work :)

Hey Nithin,

aapke comments ke liye bahut shukriya. aap bhi ek kamaal ke lekik hai!

good luck and looking forward to seeing you write a poem for valentine's!

all the very best!

warm regards
shobhana

Wow, this is amazing! Every line was perfect and the flow was fantastic! You have a way with words that is breathtaking! Excellent poem, I love it!

Wow... must say this is very deep... I agree with it completely... good work yaar..

keep writing... 5/5

Much Love,
Ipsita

Nitin.

A very deep write, woderful choice of words, truly superb.

Best regards,

Steve

Very nice! 5/5 i loved it. so much meaning and great choice of words.

This is a superbly written piece, reallly well thought and very striking. It reminds me of the kind of message I was trying to convey in my poem, 'Material World' - if you could read that and give me your own thoughts and opinions it would be muchos appreciated. Wicked work anyway, keep it up! :) x

I love this poem i can understand and the words you use and so amazing.. im looking forward to more of your poems to come.. i like all of your poems so far but this one i can relate to.. keep uo the good work

*~*Breana Marie*~*

Hey, great poem, its like sumthin i wish would happen!!!!! dude, ur a really great writer, i got good news, im gonna put it on a quote, its about my poem c.a.m and the title of the quote will b c.a.m im happy 4 once!!! weeeeeeee!!!! lol

Your poem indeed has a new taste that i really like. good luck . loved your poems.

Different - interesting rhyme scheme - though I think it works rather well. Great write.

Peace. [Sole]

Nitin
Wow! This is some poem. You have said so much in this. The way you portray the diffrent faces people put on. At the same time it is very sad that people feel they cam not be themselves.

don't judge me by my face
i lost the real one in my childhood
my foots are not worth for you to trace
as my principles are always misunderstood

I wish the joy of childhood could still be felt.
Very heartfelt piece.
Take care dost
Love Cindy