" Days of surprising wonder
Love, hate, and emotional rain... "
This line was very touching... this not ordinary dear, it's beautiful...
But tell me one thing-- is this true or r u just writing out of imagination??

great work.. 5/5

Much Love,
Ipsita

Wow.got me in tears.very well writin.love it alot. 5/5

sonam

ps:thnx 4 ur lovely comment

Two of my favorite lines from this poem:

1. I played the biggest gamble of my life & agony I get

2. You can see me smiling; yes I'm smiling through my pain
Because I'm here to cheer you all up dear; here to entertain

Wow, you did such an incredible job!! I love the style of this, and I could really relate. You're a great writer, so keep on doing what you do best! =)

Very interesting poem. Never read a perspective such as yours... Here To Entertain... great theme, great job, loved it!!! Keep writing. 5/5 for sure.

Thank you for your comment. :-)

Wow, amazing poem, i loved it! 5/5
take care xxxxx

Lovely.......so emotional it is.....very touching,.....

i missed ur poems dear! where wer u from a long time??? nice to see u back

luv,
Bharti

Wow, this is really a very nice poem.

all the best and take care
5/5

The title is perfect ... Here to Entertain! Interesting write.

Wow this is really good.. very deep & emotional. I love the perfect flow & the word choice. I really love the way that you ended it. Great job on this!

Wow..I really got wrapped into that...beautiful, I love how it rhymes and the way it flows...!
great job keep it up! -xxx-

I am in agreement.. it's beautifully written, excety dieing.. spelt 'dying'.. hope you don't mind.. lol.. It's very expressive, and totally comprehendable. I felt quite emotional.. Well done.. Truly, it deserves 5/5. Thanks for my comment too. xx

I meant 'except'.. lol xx

Thats an amazing poem! i love it, 5/5, shows feeling to!

So sad and true at the same time, it kinda hurts but ya i like it. thanks for ckecking my poems out