Comments : I Still...

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Both of ur poems are connected to each other..it seems that this is no imagination and u r really going thro this..well all i can ask u is to stay strong and if ever need of ears...let it be mine.

    penned pain very nicely once again.

    take care and all the best

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    A t0uching piece. very well written keep it up

    l0ve always d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Cristina

    Great poem..
    i luvv it

  • 18 years ago

    by fairygirl

    Wow...i know how you feel!!!!!!!!!! please keep them up xxcxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Good poem ;)
    I noe how u feel :)

  • 18 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Wow.. amazing.. speechless for this poem... wow

  • 18 years ago

    by PINKY

    Its real good you must still like him alot

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    I loved this poem hun, it's weird.. it seams as though were going through the same feelings. I lost my ex about 9 months ago and I feel the exact same way as you feel and he's with someone new, it's a horrable feeling isn't it? Anyways, you did a great job!
    oxoxo
    Danielle

  • 18 years ago

    by *Rachel*

    This is rly gd, loved it x

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Lisa

    Hey! I really loved this poem cuz I can really relate to it! It's awesome! Really well written! You're good at writing, keep it up! It's a 5/5 for sure . . .
    *Lisa*

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Don't be sad, just ermm, no idea wot 2 say here, well, good poem lol...

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Argh, way to make me cry again, sheesh...lol. This was another amazing one. I loved this part:

    I still find myself alone
    wondering if i will soon be ok
    Crying myself to sleep
    knowing that you rather
    love her than me

    Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This was a very sad poem. but i enjoyed readin it. very nice.. my fav lines r

    I woke up this morning
    And i found myself
    still thinking about you
    Still hoping and praying
    that i will soon be with you

    i rated this poem a 5

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Heyya, it's been awhile not to see yo poems.. I still say wow on this

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Heyya, it's been awhile not to see yo poems.. I still say wow on this

  • 15 years ago

    by angelprincess

    Wow this is an awesome poem, Suck being stuck on someone that will never really be there

  • 11 years ago

    by Danielle

    Hey hunnie. Great poem. I missed reading your stuff. i've been so busy, got married, had a baby. Finding myself wanting to write again. Hopefully, I can real soon. GREAT poem. Sounds like it'd be a really good song too.

    • 9 years ago

      by JAY Poet

      Wow sorry I just came back on and I ready to write again I had a baby as well!!