by Sorefromreality Feb 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
You can dress her up, |
by FlippedOut
Its so sad that it gives me shivers |
by Ike Dizzle
You're right. This is like my poem. Both are being misused. Nice job. 5/5 |
by Tammie
I really loved this poem. i agree, the name was good. it pulled me in. good job. 5/5 |
Arg my swining out of life and into death poem the comment you gave on it well thanks but it doesn't have to do with me. i dont write emotions i just write....well...i just write. a very few poems i have have to do with my emotions or how i feel about things. my feelings dont get good ratings my others do. thanks alot for the bible recomendation but i am reallyyyyy not that religious at all. i call my religion a bi polor religion. because it keeps changing. my beliefs that is not the religion itself. you can read my religion is an excape to reality poem....extremly long...some of it is what i believe some of it is what i believed.....well thanks again c ya. if you keep reading mine i'll keep reading yours. c ya. :p |
Very creative idea. the title caught my eye and thats very important to have a catchy title otherwise ppl wont read. but it was a creative idea. i liked it enough so i'll give it a five. c ya. |