Wow this poem is amazing. Its so deep. I loved it. 5/5

Awwwwwwwww....that is so deep and heartfelt...i love it!!! great job!!...

~!Sandra!~

AwWwWwW, this is so deep and it kinda makes me sad to read your poem but i do think you did a great job writing it. 5/5!

I liked this poem alot
the line "have u ever seen paper cry" was really creative and was a good way to end your poem

Your poem is beautiful and seems to convey the emotions of pure sorrow and hopelessness; the pain only someone who has been used and tossed away like trash can know. Thank you for sharing this poem.

Very creative idea. the title caught my eye and thats very important to have a catchy title otherwise ppl wont read. but it was a creative idea. i liked it enough so i'll give it a five. c ya.

Arg my swining out of life and into death poem the comment you gave on it well thanks but it doesn't have to do with me. i dont write emotions i just write....well...i just write. a very few poems i have have to do with my emotions or how i feel about things. my feelings dont get good ratings my others do. thanks alot for the bible recomendation but i am reallyyyyy not that religious at all. i call my religion a bi polor religion. because it keeps changing. my beliefs that is not the religion itself. you can read my religion is an excape to reality poem....extremly long...some of it is what i believe some of it is what i believed.....well thanks again c ya. if you keep reading mine i'll keep reading yours. c ya. :p

I really loved this poem. i agree, the name was good. it pulled me in. good job. 5/5

You're right. This is like my poem. Both are being misused. Nice job. 5/5

Its so sad that it gives me shivers