Her last words (vampire)

by silhouette fairy   Feb 7, 2006


He lifts his eyes
as she runs to him
she is crying
but why he isn't sure
the he sees another person
chasing her, why?
she reaches him
holding her, she begs him to save her
"just wait, he won't hurt you"
"oh but he will," she cries
"the one you should run from is me"
opening his mouth
revealing his fangs
she gives out a scream
"oh please someone help me!"
it rings through the forest
for those are truly
her last words

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  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I like reading your poems so much. They're all very good. Keep it up! 5/5

    Ravyn

  • 18 years ago

    by IfIhide11

    Interesting, very. I have not ever read a poem that did fantasy. It was a wonderful poem and I enjoyed reading it.

    -ifihide

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    It's pretty good peice, i agree with Poonam about the twist at the end, very well composed. though i feel you could have explored the idea slightly more in depth, but still this peice is good and well written

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    This is interesting. i think that you should make it a little longer to add some more suspense. the twist at the end is good though. nice job

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