by †Undone♥ Feb 7, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
You always make me worry, |
by Stabbylou
Another great poem, you write really well. Again a very sad message there, this was quite moving, the obvious love for your sister and your desperation... yeah i'm rambling, stay strong and certainly keep writing x |
by Juls
Awww..thats so good. I always wanted a little sister but I have 2 older brothers. Great work though I enjoy reading your poems you have something unquie about them. |
by sandra young
Not bad , the ending was not what i expected. but overall it was a 4 |
by jess
Wow! great poem. 5/5 |