You

by †Undone♥   Feb 7, 2006


You always make me worry,
you always make me grin.
You have a major tendency to always want to win.

You are living in a shadow,
you aren't your separate self.
You're always talking about the legacy of somebody else.

But you can be my equal,
you can be my cure,
every time I think about walking out this door.

You're the thing that makes me stay,
to live without you I would die,
So remember to never leave me, but instead stay and try.

Try to find me after death,
for you are my life,
and try to forgive me for dying because of this knife.

*In Dedication to my little sister Diana*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Another great poem, you write really well. Again a very sad message there, this was quite moving, the obvious love for your sister and your desperation... yeah i'm rambling, stay strong and certainly keep writing x

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Awww..thats so good. I always wanted a little sister but I have 2 older brothers. Great work though I enjoy reading your poems you have something unquie about them.
    Juls

  • 18 years ago

    by sandra young

    Not bad , the ending was not what i expected. but overall it was a 4

  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    Wow! great poem. 5/5
    love jess XxXxXxXxXx

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