Wow! great poem. 5/5
love jess XxXxXxXxXx

Not bad , the ending was not what i expected. but overall it was a 4

Awww..thats so good. I always wanted a little sister but I have 2 older brothers. Great work though I enjoy reading your poems you have something unquie about them.
Juls

Another great poem, you write really well. Again a very sad message there, this was quite moving, the obvious love for your sister and your desperation... yeah i'm rambling, stay strong and certainly keep writing x