Shh, quiet.

by A.K.A   Feb 7, 2006


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(shh) quiet they'll hear you. Even though they're not near you. Why must you always be listened to. And I am cast out into the blue. I try to speak but instead I choke. Then I cough up the quiet words I almost spoke. Instead of talking I stand back and listen. For me to speak up for once is what I'm wishing. I open my mouth again to talk. But cross my tongue and down my throat my words walk. They are scared and therefore always defeated. And me cast out into the blue is always repeated.

(shh) quiet they'll hear you. Even though they're not near you. Soon a new era will begin. When I won't bottle myself in. I will shout, I will yell, I will scream. I would let the world hear my dream. But for now my eyes have to say my words. Because every time I try silence occurs.

(shh) quiet they'll hear you. Even though they're not near you. Sometimes I wonder if anyone even cares. Cause they just shoo off my cold hard stares. They watch my actions but can't see my feelings. They know how everyone else feels but don't know how I'm dealing. When someone does care to hear how I had to pay. Then and only then I will have nothing to say. Then I will show them how I felt. Then they will have to deal with what I dealt. If actions are worth words why ain't I heard are they blind. Or do my words have to follow my actions to stay in mind.

(shh) quiet they'll hear you. Even though they're not near you. I don't get it whats wrong. They don't hear me when I'm in their face. But they listen when I'm gone. Yell now they'll listen. And for the girl in the blue to come back is what they're wishing.

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much love A_K_A

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey aka! great job huny... maybe just spread it out a bit more so it's easier 2 read! other than that no complaints! *hugs* and don't worry I've been here a year and Iv only just started getting regular comments! and even then I hav 2 get around and comment heaps. Keep at in huny!
    Ruthie xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by ~TornBecauseOfYou~

    Great Poem..Excellent Job..and i loved your Story/poetry style..Great job..and greatly expressed
    5/5
    ~TPOMH~

  • 18 years ago

    by Katey

    Good poem i like it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Manny

    What can I say,it's very well written out and seriously good.I don't see how you came up with such good work.It also gives me this mystery feel to it at the end about the girl in the blue.Also you might wish to fix this one error.You had put "here" at the begining...it should be "hear".Just saying.Well keep it up,this is seriously worth a 5/5.