What can I say,it's very well written out and seriously good.I don't see how you came up with such good work.It also gives me this mystery feel to it at the end about the girl in the blue.Also you might wish to fix this one error.You had put "here" at the begining...it should be "hear".Just saying.Well keep it up,this is seriously worth a 5/5.

Good poem i like it!!

Great Poem..Excellent Job..and i loved your Story/poetry style..Great job..and greatly expressed
5/5
~TPOMH~

Hey aka! great job huny... maybe just spread it out a bit more so it's easier 2 read! other than that no complaints! *hugs* and don't worry I've been here a year and Iv only just started getting regular comments! and even then I hav 2 get around and comment heaps. Keep at in huny!
Ruthie xoxo