Fight

by Taylor Anderson   Feb 8, 2006


Ignored,forlorn, undisclosed,
Where his love is no one knows

His eyes are shot a blackened white
Like a boy who tried to fight

Fighting an invisible foe
To hide a pain he cannot show

Like the love he tried to hide
In the end it finally died

And although all was said and done,
The boy is still trying to run
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Ok, I have some more, but I'll keep on adding to this poem, I am aware that it's way too short

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  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    Am liking it so far...looking forward to the conclusion.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    I'm not going to vote until it's done

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Your roots? Your first poem was Free verse..Hmm.

    Anyways, good poem, yes I know it's a work in progress but it's short. The flow is a little off and thats all I have to say. Good poem