Why did you do it?

by Mark   Feb 8, 2006


You told me you cared,
And told my mum, something unbared.
I told you the out come, I thought you knew,
You have no idea, what you've put me through.
I cut myself, for a second time,
I should stop, it's like a crime.
I'm too tired of being here,
You do not know, but it brings a tear.
It's hard for me, I'm sorry I hurt you,
I'm sorry for what, I've put you through.
The knife I used, has been covered in blood,
The blood from my arm, it's like a flood.
Some day, you'll understand why,
As this time, this time will fly.
Once I'm gone, you'll forget me so fast,
Just please, don't bring up the past.
I made some mistakes which I'm sorry for,
But being sorry won't take it back, I'll be dead, laying on the floor.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Lots of pain and anguish... good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aww, lol I just realised I've said "aww" at the start of every comment haha.
    lol... but yeah.. This is good too, But I think you should go deeper, Cause in it you say how your sorry for what you put them through, But maybe try to expand it a bit. Explain what your so sorry for, And what did you put them through. Digg in really deep! lol Hope that helped =] 5/5

    luv me x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Fantastic poem def got my 5 vote keep writing and take care sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Sad. again.

    =(

    i don't like you being sad. no, i don't.

    you *points to you* deserve to be happy. so i *points to self* will make sure that happens. lol..

    love, love, love you.

    i'm going to email you after i make this friend space thing for Glen-Duh on myspace. it's too complicated for her comprehension. =P

  • 18 years ago

    by SpecialAngel55

    Your poem was wonderfully, so much Imagery was used!! so much emotion! I really liked it!

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