So beautifully written, I love it! ;o)

What a talented young lady! .... Very well done for all of the poetry that has been submitted on your page! (EXCELENT)

Dave (UK) X

Truly inspirational, thank you for writing this. Highest praises on this and all of your poetry.
*VioletRaven*

Excellent piece of poetry!

i like your coinage of "keeper of my dreams!"

good luck and keep writing

shobhana

Nice write, I liked, very positive!!!

I love the innocence portrayed in this, it's quite refreshing. I pray all your dreams come true.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Very nicely done....beautiful poem.

Hey. Thanks for the comment you gave me :). I came here to repay the favour, and I'm quite happy I did. Personally, I favour rhyming poems, however this one seemed to catch my attention right from the title down to the end. I found it really well written, and hope to see lots more from you. I have no complaints :). Keep up the good work.