Beautifully written....the flow was just perfect and the feelings were so well portrayed...liked the way you ended ur poem....take care and keep smiling always....

This poem has a grceful flow and the words pack in so much emotion!
great one this!
do take care

shobhana

I hv been eagerly waiting for this one to launch here. i hv been reading this poem almost on regular basis for last one week..since u shared with me. as again every poem and every line and every word seems to be mine.
ur poems are just so true..so real..so touchy..i can really feel it deep inside. u r simply an amazing person and a wonderful writer.

btw...u did the ending very beautifully..i knew it i could never do justice to this beautiful work of urs. u did so good.

all the best and take care

A most wonderful write, excellent!!!

Hey congratulations dear, i am so happy to see you here...rem i told you...soon you will reach here as you certainly deserve every bit of success.

now this is just the begininning...best from you is yet to come....so bring your pen and paper... :o)

all the best and take care