by the wonderful me Feb 8, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
I thought about you all day, |
by darkangel112
This is a pretty poem, you should definetaly write more. i agree that you should put it in a stanza like form, that would make it easier to read. btw, thanx for the comment |
by Cuddles
This is really good. I have but one suggestion, and that is that you change it into a stanza like form. It's a little easier to read that way. Great job! |