by Beautiful~*~Dragons~*~Fire Feb 8, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
The wind whispers |
This is such a serene piece, one is so at peace after reading it. the graceful diction and flow of the poem make it indeed a beautiful poem. I like your choice of a refrain at the begining for each stanza which has works wonders for the poem. Keep up the good work. |