So my comment deffinetly didn't go the first time....
Really great poem you wrote it very well.
its a 5/5 without a doubt.
keep up the good work!!

I love it! great poem. keep up the good work!
~Sami
ps. thanks for the advice :)

A t0uching piece. l0t 0f em0ti0n very t0uching

THATS AMAZING HUN!! I loved the rhyming in some of the paragraphs! Keep it up! 5.5! Hope to see you soon!

D_P

U noe wut. this poem was gr8
I felt ur passion
keep it up nd good luck
thnx 4 the comment on ma poem :)
much lov
N3mA x0x0x0x0x

Wow - such a sad poem, but don't let go of your hopes :) There were some great lines in there, especcially

Hell I'm not even sure what to say
But apart of me is breaking with
Each passing day

Peace. [Sole]

I noticed you write a lot of sad and love poems. I wish I could read those.
You can learn alot about a person from their poetry. You feel their emotions with their write. You read their stories, it sometimes might not be true, but you can understand them from it.

This was a really sad write, and I hope to be coming back to read your love poems sometime. You are a talented writer. Thanks for the reads, it was worth the time :)