Wow! i could really feel the emotion in this poem, im sorry about your dad and i hope things get better.

5/5 love jess XxXxXxXxXx

Awwww... its so sad. i hope your relationship with ur dad works out ok. my dad has always been there for me, except, my mom hasn't. i know its hard. don't get too discouraged.. don't give up... eventually, it will work out, and if it still doesn't, you atleast can't say, you tried in the relationship, even if he didn't... know what i mean?

great poem.... well expressed. excellent. 5/5!

wonderful work! keep it up!

michelle