Closer

Awesome poem...i specially loved this part
"You and me
Me and you
Hearts combined
Love at first sight"
love it...and i can really relate to it....

Oh i can relate with this one ;)

pili

Wow, I really like this poem. I mean its Great poem, I can relate. Checkout my poems if you get a change.

Well but yet so far.. as its just the beginning of something, still along way to go.. tho we still r close, its still yet so far, i dunno if it makes sense to u, im sorry if it doesnt :( and ty both for ur comments, appreciated :)

I like it!! nice work!! but what do you mean about the yet so far?? comment back if you would!