I like it!! nice work!! but what do you mean about the yet so far?? comment back if you would!

Well but yet so far.. as its just the beginning of something, still along way to go.. tho we still r close, its still yet so far, i dunno if it makes sense to u, im sorry if it doesnt :( and ty both for ur comments, appreciated :)

Wow, I really like this poem. I mean its Great poem, I can relate. Checkout my poems if you get a change.

Oh i can relate with this one ;)

pili

Awesome poem...i specially loved this part
"You and me
Me and you
Hearts combined
Love at first sight"
love it...and i can really relate to it....