Thats really good. wot did ur english teacher say? xx

That was very very beautiful..powerful..great job..5/5

Very powerfully written, hope your english teacher liked it

5/5

Wow. amazing. i`m actually reading a book about the holocaust right now. it`s a very depressing thing...
this poem really 'connects' with it. i love it XD
-lauren

This is really sad :(
The holocaust really hits me hard - I don't know why - it just was the cause of immense suffering
Thanks for the beautiful poem