by Richard Feb 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
We live in a state of confusion, |
This was awesome! haunting and dark, just what i love! |
This was awesome! haunting and dark, just what i love! |
by gemowski
This is a BRILL piece really good, you've got your own unique wriring style. |
I liked the way you addressed the reader as the end of the poem. This felt more like love poem to me. Very sensually written...Great stuff. You are good with titles they really draw the reader in. |
by Synh
Very interesting. You've got massive talent. 5/5 |