Great job through your expression..Really Really Deep....Excellnet job..i enjoyed that one
5/5
PeAcE
~The Poet~

Great peice very well expressed and thought though.

That deep. I like how you showed your emotions

Wow....im speachless.... 5/5

This is really good.. very different, but you did a great job on it. You described everything really well & I love all of the emotions behind it. Great job on this!

Thats very sad!
i loved the use of words you put in this poem! wow

keep it up!

I liked it, not entirely perfect, but writing about your next poem isn't exactly te simpliest thing:) 4/5