SOARING FREE

by holly   Feb 9, 2006


Soaring with the wind,
from flower to flower,
tree to tree
never answering to anyone.

Started off ugly till one day burst forth,
to live their Short life full of beauty and delight.

They go where the wind does,
Careless and beautiful.
I wish i had the life of a butterfly,
Soaring Free.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I wish i had the life of a butterfly,
    Soaring Free.
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    I liked those lines alot. It was a great poem, But it felt like there was something missing... I dunno..Maybe it's just me. But don't get me wrong, I did like it the way it is now. It's a good poem. 5/5

    `Taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wowo it made it seem likw u were a blooming caterpiller or sumthing wow i lovee this soooooo sooooo mucch.

    Lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Not my favorite of yours but it was still really good .. keep it up

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

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