Your write style might have been hard to follow if I didn't catch onto the emotion behind the poem. You are on the right track to becoming something great, you just need to keep working at developing your natural gift.

Splendid, 4/5

Good job keep it real poems are really good when there from the heart

Hey that was sooo good i so no how your feeling and can relate....keep it up and keep shining take care with love always JoSiE

Great job.. Its SO much better when it comes from the heart.. Great job again..

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

I know thats werid you KNOW he wont love you and that you'll nvr be his yet that nvr stops anyone..wow I lveo this interpritation hun/

lissa