I MISS U....

by PURE HEART   Feb 9, 2006


Today I m feeling so low as you are not with me,
I miss u every moment wherever I may be.

My mind sets no where and just thinks about you,
I wanna talk a lot with you but our talks are due.

My lips are trembling and calling your name,
I cannot see you in front of me and I m going through this pain.

My tears are in trauma should they flow out or lay inside,
they want to roll down my cheeks but could not decide.

My one hand holds the other as it cannot hold yours,
It wanders for only your warm touch , I m sure.

My heart beats gets faster wishing you might be here,
giving me the feel of joy, love and care.

How much I love you is all i know,
i just feel it and I dont want to show.

I miss you with every beat of my heart, no doubt
you are the only one of whom i can think about.....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cassie Mclellan

    Hey
    havent looked at your poems for a lond time..awesome job..well keep writing darling
    cassie*

  • 18 years ago

    by Adriana

    I can relate to this poem...again love it, love it, love it

  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Hey hey bharti
    im glad to be talkin to an indian :D...anyway im another indian on this site....and i absolutely positively love all your poems...specially the hindi ones...theyre written with so much feeling.

    abt this poem....missing is a very sad emotion...and i knw im going to miss this one girl in another 10 days...because after that im never in my life going to see her again. i hope goodbye wasnt forever...but it looks like this one is.

    anyway, keep writing.
    and if u can, please read a few of my poems n temme how u find them. i'd be honoured. :D
    Much love, Dhaval

  • 18 years ago

    by Gummie Bear

    This is Hela Good... Keep Up Tha Good work and Keep The Poems Coming!

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    My one hand holds the other as it cannot hold yours,
    It wanders for only your warm touch , I m sure.

    wow Bharti, this is just so amazing yaar.....saawan ka mahina aa gaya hai kya... :o))

    all the best and take care
    5/5 for sure