by master of shadow Feb 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
What is this world we have made for ourselves? |
Very deep man, very deep. im drowning in the deepness. lol ok, im just joking... lol but it is deep. 5/5 |
by VioletRaven
A very powerful poem, the expressions resonate deeply, a poem of undeniable truths. I like the way you began by questioning, it's intreguing, and then the way you finish with a dark, ominous statement. |