It's good to see you so touched by that story that you wrote this, you've really done him justice. It sounds almost worse when you break down the events into what happened. well done, K

thanks guys your comments mean so much especially as this story is true and i really want to be able to do Jmie justice!

Hayley.....that is the best one i have read from you...it was amazing and OMG i cant find the words breathtaking i loved it.

Its sad that its based on a real life tragedy that breaks my heart that peole can be so evil...no one deserves that heart ache that his family must be going through....you definetly done justice with that poem...it hit me deep inside your best yet.

I forgot to mention the title was fantastic.

thanks guys, the title i choose because of the title of the programme made about jamies killing, so not all that orginal!

I liked the title very much... well done... and I liked the poem very much as well... it's sad how many people die everyday because of ignorance... People should respect each other and try to live in peace... It's sad how they always get an excuse to start a war...
Anyway, congratulations... I guess poems are a reflection of our souls... :)

hey imade top 5, whoo hoo, didnt c that coming! i really never thought iwould make top 5! jesus,mary and joesph!

This is truley sad, wonderfully written tho. Keep writing.

WOOOW! i'm so sorry that is truely a tragic story, these kind of things happen every day and it makes me sick ot my stomach, i'm so sorry for you loss, and i'm so sorry for the parents, that is such a terrible thing :-( omg, i'm crying...i hate this world, :'(

sorry, i'm such a dope, that was a beautiful poem by the way...keep it up! I love ur poems, ur a wonderful writer!