I loved the ending! So emotional. So many families are like that. I love the cover of one of Marylin Manson's cd's. A portrait of the American Family. I think that's what it's called. Your poem reminded me of that.

Oh yeah, yeah me and Emma have been e-mailing back and forth. She's helping me out a lot! (I hope I'm doing the same for her!) And if you ever need to talk...just tell me. I'll give you my e-mail or Emma can!

Great peice, this is very well written and descriptive. there is a line which i had a little bit of difficulty with "But the emotions are too much, too" i think there may be a gramatical error in there.. but not entirly sure how to fix it.

anyway good peice